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his is the first tune I've uploaded. Its a housey, techy, spacey type thing.

Constructive criticism is welcome and encouraged. More to come on my myspace page in the near future

Here's the link:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=5A4NKL2A

www.myspace.com/phispiral

This is a tough one
Everything seems to be in the right place, and the clarity is fine.
But the groove just seems off.
Its somehow "heavy"?
Seems gluey and just not quite right - but not in a good way.
I like it on the whole and the sound is balanced.
Sorry to be vague and probably not helping, but thats all I can come up with.

Peace
out

no no,any constructive comment at all is very much appreciated

i find it so hard to view my work objectively

getting the groove right seems to be the the one thing i have problems with with uptempo tracks. it doesn't "hop" along as id like. i also need to pay closer attention to eqing. it's tough without monitors!

thanks for your comment