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new electro track
Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 2:51 am
by robleighton22
gotta brand new track i made today. its got more of a hook than most of my other stuff. going for the banging electro. needs work on the vocals samples and drums, and some effects. but im ready for some initial feedback to keep me going. so any comments much appreciated.
www.soundclick.com/littlerob
"synthesise it!"
cheers
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 11:36 pm
by Affiliation
you lost me at 1:30. cool intro. bring back that beat without the fluff. need some more work on that synth lead that seems to be so dead center its out of the mix. make the whole track shorter. cheers. just my 2 cents.
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:11 am
by robleighton22
cheers for the feeback. ive done some adjustments, so give it another listen. less reverb, and added some side-chaining on the bass, plus it sounds a bit sharper (ive noticed that the arpegiated sequence is too quiet/flat, must hav missed that, whoops, will need to update.. but i do intend to re-structure and add a proper hook with the vocals. ill b updating this track a lot within the next few days.
Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 2:25 am
by avatarzero
Good funky beat. I also got "lost" a bit. All great elements. I'm not very knowledgeable yet about some of the technical stuff, but Affiliation's post seems to have covered that nicely. In my opinion it just needs editing down a bit.
