d/l if you have some time to listen
Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 10:49 pm
Production-wise, the file sounds a bit distorted/over-driven or over-compressed, especially in the bass. Not sure if that was completely intentional. Perhaps taking down the master input or the compression ratio would solve that problem, because i sense that otherwise it's probably not poorly produced.
Music-wise, for this style of music (tech-house), the track is pretty short at just over 3.5 minutes. I've always liked this type of chordy techno, and the sounds over-all work for me, but to keep interest up (especially since this is so short) a few more change ups would be necessary...although you do already have a sense of that, with a nice breakdown just after the 2 minute mark. Draw thus out longer, add a couple more sounds and build-ups, break downs and you're onto something.