need feedback for my first track

aktasz · Post by **aktasz** » Wed Apr 23, 2008 12:12 am

some feedback please, thanks

follow this link, it plays there
http://www.myspace.com/egoistetechno

amigo · Post by **amigo** » Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:20 am

I like it and think it has great potential.

soundtechdan · Post by **soundtechdan** » Thu Apr 24, 2008 11:20 am

Yer not bad I think you do need some form of hook to the track but it does have potential

http://www.myspace.com/tiredofbeingboring

Night Spirit · Post by **Night Spirit** » Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:07 pm

Definitely write a hook and use some effects to create interest. Remember, the human ear is keen on recognizing repetition and if you dont change it up (however slightly) people will get bored and tune it out.