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You did a good job of it putting it all together

I guess I'd like to hear it get to more of a conclusion

more mixing of the vocals together & what not

But I have a hard time with that myself

Great start though!

Thanks that's something I can work with

Is that a problem throughout the whole song or only near the end?

I would agree that the end is messy

I just listened to it again and I'm okay with the rest

But my virgin electronic ear might not know what to be listening for

*edit*
Also I'm listening to ...

I don't hear the similarity

Their melody doesn't sound like mine

And the mixing style is a lot different

I wouldn't mind you pointing it out more

I am totally open to trying people's suggestions

It's 140 bpm & in the key of G
If this gets you dancing please let me know
Or if it could get you dancing but needs this/that
Then let me know!

http://soundcloud.com/dharma-bums/one-time

Hey Thanks a lot
I'm going to be posting a newer version sometime soon
I'm going to try & mix it different
And then put a 4 on the floor on it later on

http://forum.ableton.com/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=149795

Here's a link to one of my songs
It's actually my first so I'd love any comments

Everything was popping a lot more on that one!

I would all appreciate all & any comments
I really don't know all that much about electronic music
The whole song is just stuff that comes packaged with ableton

So far people have suggested I:
a) mix it more like an electronic song
b) re-mix it with a dubstep bass line

http://soundcloud.com/dharma ...

I think it's pretty good how it is
I'm pretty impressed with how you got your vocals sounding!
I think you should put a bigger bass line behind it
And maybe mix the vocals a little more sparsely