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Hi..
I mainly want to produce progressive psy trance but tryed producing some house ..here it is,maybe a little bit cheesy but hey i learned alot from it:
http://soundcloud.com/bananskrell/groovy2
what do you guys think? some constructive critsm would be nice.

hahah..lol Forge.,your really got me laughing good time...
I understand this is a forum for arrogant music geniuses with no place for "stupid" questions, i guess you have forgotten that yourself also sometime was a newbie?..Anyway i still got some constructive answers,thanks.

i`m a learner in progress with love for a lot electronic music genres all my life.. that`s enough for me to try start and make music..
i guess 102455 and andydes are mucical geniuses and was born as musician,then i can understand it is hard for them to answer like normal people.I guess you people ...

Sounds like a good tip,but then comes the trouble to copy the tune.It`s hard to just copy a song just by hearing it.I can see myself stuck at how to make a specific sound,sfx,lead etc..I don`t know where to begin.But off course i need to try,regardless i will learn something on the way .
I really ...

hi.. trying to make progressive psychedelic trance but can`t get any further then making a bassline,kick, and cymbals before my creativity almost stops..Because i don`t know what to do next..
trying to make some acid sounds etc,but are never happy with how it sounds.. don`t really know how to ...