New progressive Techno work in progress. Love some feedback.

[Alan Wilson]

http://soundcloud.com/big-al-2/tracks

Would love some feedback.
Thanks in advance.

Big Al.

[Walkingmachine]

decent start....minimal shit like this is all based on subtle complexities of the beat/percussion so you might want to work on spicing that up a little....also try using filters to fade things in/out and to change up the timbres of your synths

[Alan Wilson]

Cheers mate. Will try some stuff you've suggested. This forum isn't exactly flooding with feedback is it. Never mind hey.
But thanks again. +1

Al.

[Sanderr]

Hey mate, just had a listen. Really like the vocal samples and the overall feel of the track! Left some suggestions in the timed bar on soundcloud.

[1nfinitezer0]

nice start, definitely needs more movement though. think of where you want the focus to be to present the moment in the track, and then think about gradual automation of vol, eq, efx (chorus, whatever) that can help you move that focus.

and i agree with walking machine, the percussion needs something. it feels flat, the same throughout. phaser your hi hats? lp that main arp gurgle till it's just clicks and use as percussion fills?

have fun ~: )

[tan111]

Wow, that impressed me just from the very first seconds, and left good feelings afterwards, nice done indeed!

[Alan Wilson]

Thanks for all the feedback.
Will keep working on this one.
I also have another 2 in the pipeline.
Keep eyes and ears pealed.

Peace.

Al.

[Damonv]

Like Agraphobia, very good work. The only thing I can hear not working is the "vocoder loop" sound (comes in at 2.17) that is slightly out of sync, a little warping should sort that out when it blends with the beat.

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