New Tech-House Track, Perception

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Sanderr
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New Tech-House Track, Perception

Post by Sanderr » Tue Mar 09, 2010 1:05 am

Hello all, finished on the first version of a new tech-house track today, please tell me what you think!

http://soundcloud.com/sanderbongertman/ ... iginal-mix

Regards,

Sander

Sanderr
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Re: New Tech-House Track, Perception

Post by Sanderr » Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:48 pm

second version is online now at the same link!

Tone Deft
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Re: New Tech-House Track, Perception

Post by Tone Deft » Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:22 pm

1:00 - I like this, nice mix, tight in the low end.

that percussive synth might be a bit loud.

2:10 - don't care for that snare.

3:00 - nice buildup going on here

nice outro.

good tune!
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Sanderr
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Re: New Tech-House Track, Perception

Post by Sanderr » Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:54 pm

thanks for checking it out!

I might have to take another look at the percussive synth indeed, sounds a bit loud. What exactly do you mean with don't care for the snare hehe? ;)

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Re: New Tech-House Track, Perception

Post by Tone Deft » Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:58 pm

the snare just sounds thin, too wimpy to stand up to the phatness of the other sounds around it. or maybe that's how you like it. ;)

definitely keep in mind that I try to write something, anything to give feedback, sometimes the feedback is more valid, sometimes it's wrong.

it's a good track, no doubt.
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Sanderr
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Re: New Tech-House Track, Perception

Post by Sanderr » Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:16 pm

Ah, now I see what you mean :) well any feedback is much appreciated so thanks a lot! Do you have tracks as well on soundcloud or something? cheers

Tone Deft
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Re: New Tech-House Track, Perception

Post by Tone Deft » Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:23 pm

just one. <insert usual list of excuses.> mostly I just can't write songs, I just like to make loops and jam out, no focus, blah, blah.

http://soundcloud.com/tracks/search?q[fulltext]=eephlat


glad to help, it's really interesting to hear other peoples' work, nice way to get to know posters as well.
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At people who I'd much rather kick in the eye?
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Sanderr
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Re: New Tech-House Track, Perception

Post by Sanderr » Wed Mar 10, 2010 10:53 pm

Well you should make a full version of that track, sound awesome mate!

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