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timothyallan · Post by **timothyallan** » Mon Mar 22, 2010 7:28 am

Latest version Live
You crash on me and I weep
forums here I come

plantaginate · Post by **plantaginate** » Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:08 am

words and letters here
and vowels and consonants too
also some stuff here

plantaginate · Post by **plantaginate** » Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:11 am

last visit was mon
march 22 2010
134 am

flippo · Post by **flippo** » Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:43 am

oh silly little haiku
you say a thing and another
and then some more words

timothyallan · Post by **timothyallan** » Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:46 am

Okay, so this has been an epic fail so far. Let's go over what a haiku is.

Structure:
* 3 Lines
* Lines 1,2,3 have 5,7,5 syllables respectively.
* Unrhymed

here is my haiku
oh how great it looks
made of three small lines

flippo · Post by **flippo** » Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:16 am

funny thing is I knew the 5-7-5 structure, just that my brain stoped working for a few moments.

I even 'counted' them on my fingers as I read,

shimmy · Post by **shimmy** » Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:36 pm

Hello its TIGER
My wife is gonna call you
Please remove your name

KrisM · Post by **KrisM** » Mon Mar 22, 2010 6:29 pm

I'm not good at this
But then I guess I just did
Write this silly thing

mikemc · Post by **mikemc** » Tue Mar 23, 2010 9:10 pm

timothyallan:
this line's seven syllables,
timothyallan.

john doe by choice · Post by **john doe by choice** » Tue Mar 23, 2010 9:41 pm

mikemc wrote:timothyallan:
this line's seven syllables,
timothyallan.

Ah, you beat me to it. Well played, good sir

Rave · Post by **Rave** » Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:01 pm

Shut the fuck up you bitch
going to bang your bum bloody
I love you fruit cup

Pitch Black · Post by **Pitch Black** » Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:04 pm

^^^
interesting words
I think I see a subtext
passive-aggressive

So Solid Poo · Post by **So Solid Poo** » Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:25 pm

YO WUTUP NIIIIIGGA
I SED YO NIIIIIIGGGGGA YO YO
SO SOLID POO YO

mikemc · Post by **mikemc** » Wed Mar 24, 2010 12:06 am

john doe by choice wrote:
mikemc wrote:timothyallan:
this line's seven syllables,
timothyallan.
Ah, you beat me to it. Well played, good sir

Ah, john doe by choice
No need to be despondent:
Great minds think alike.

funky shit · Post by **funky shit** » Wed Mar 24, 2010 4:23 pm

this is my haiku
this is my awesome haiku
i like chocolate

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