Tech house

[jonesy]

Hi All

This is my first completed tune. I made it using mainly Live.

Any feedback would be very much appreciated -

http://soundcloud.com/star_deluxe/gruffalo-new-1

Thanks

Jonesy

[Tone Deft]

congratulations!

cool track!

I might make the bassy grindy sound even lower in tone, or make a copy of it and pitch it down an octave to make it really growl. overall the tune doesn't need much more just some polish to make some parts sparkle. I don't know of any tips to make that happen.

well written, good job man!