How I spent my school holidays.

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marconk
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How I spent my school holidays.

Post by marconk » Sun Jun 06, 2010 5:38 pm

Produced some music.
I've been experimenting with different styles. Would like to hear what you think. I mostly remix but I made one original piece- *insert wasteman name here*
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Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Post by tan111 » Sun Jun 06, 2010 7:44 pm

YOu need to spend some more time I suppose because I didn`t get It :(

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Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Post by martin808 » Sun Jun 06, 2010 10:25 pm

I really like all the remixes. good production.

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Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Post by leedsquietman » Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:59 am

your original track was great for about 2 minutes, seriously nice kick, nice delayed techno chords etc, but it could use a little extra variety. I'm not a fan of the side stick which comes in briefly.

This is maybe a little too minimal for my tastes, but some type of lead melody sound and/or some claps or snare, hats etc or percussion as the track builds would make it more enjoyable for me to listen to beyond that initial 2 minute period.
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Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Post by som » Mon Jun 07, 2010 7:39 am

Good sounds, but the layout and overall structure is too simple for a complete song. But a good start...
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Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Post by andrew_ » Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:37 pm

I agree with the above, overall the production is a bit too minimal for my tastes...

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