My first beat...

Share your tracks with other users.
Post Reply
ChrisMack99
Posts: 198
Joined: Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:50 pm

My first beat...

Post by ChrisMack99 » Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:51 pm

Let me know what you guys think. I'm definitely looking for criticism.

EDIT: I fixed the link...and added a bassline...

http://soundcloud.com/chrismack-1/inaugural-womp
Last edited by ChrisMack99 on Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:10 pm, edited 4 times in total.
Top
stonee
Posts: 1098
Joined: Sun Sep 16, 2007 1:01 am
Location: halifax, NS Canada
Contact:
Contact stonee

Re: My first beat...

Post by stonee » Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:24 pm

file isnt there!
Top
kamih
Posts: 39
Joined: Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:52 am
Location: NJ, USA
Contact:
Contact kamih

Re: My first beat...

Post by kamih » Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:31 am

It sounds like one of those bass drum hits is too late or too early (in the second variation).
Now add some melody on top of this, and try to kill the monotony by adding drum and bass variations! :D
Top
ChrisMack99
Posts: 198
Joined: Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:50 pm

Re: My first beat...

Post by ChrisMack99 » Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:10 pm

I added some more parts.
Top
Post Reply

Return to “Music Sharing”