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Romance Novel Ch 4
private link... somehow Chapter 4 got finished before chapter 3 lol!
Will post chapter 3 in a few!
Feedback Appreciated, Cinematic / Electronic
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digitallush
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Re: Feedback Appreciated, Cinematic / Electronic
Hi lush,
I would add some cello. I think it would be a good contrast to the high (violin?) strings, and would add some low end to your track (for which it is very lacking right now).
Also, the violin gets a bit annoying after a while. Maybe have a break in the middle, and change its sound a bit after that?
Pretty cool otherwise, and I really like the rythms!
I would add some cello. I think it would be a good contrast to the high (violin?) strings, and would add some low end to your track (for which it is very lacking right now).
Also, the violin gets a bit annoying after a while. Maybe have a break in the middle, and change its sound a bit after that?
Pretty cool otherwise, and I really like the rythms!
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digitallush
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Re: Feedback Appreciated, Cinematic / Electronic
Hey Kamih, thank you for the feedback. A lot of times if I do a recording in one take (like the strings) I'll get kind of attached to it, but I agree, and think it can get a little mundane. I could experiment with flowing from the strings into a cello and I think that would be really good for me. Thank you!