my first electronic song!

[Dharma Bum]

I would all appreciate all & any comments
I really don't know all that much about electronic music
The whole song is just stuff that comes packaged with ableton

So far people have suggested I:
a) mix it more like an electronic song
b) re-mix it with a dubstep bass line

http://soundcloud.com/dharma-bums/ego

Thanks

[AntVusten]

I definitively like your song. Its clean and original with a good evolution from the begining to the end :-°)

[AntVusten]

I definitively like your song. Its clean and original with a good evolution from the begining to the end :-°)

[Dharma Bum]

Hey Thanks a lot
I'm going to be posting a newer version sometime soon
I'm going to try & mix it different
And then put a 4 on the floor on it later on