would like feed back on recent track

[stonee]

http://soundcloud.com/dartmouthian/groah-unfinished


not quite done yet. still some auto tweaks to be made, and the builds need to be built proper.

I dunno how I feel about distorting the lead part, but i think it would be boring without it.

it also feels like its missing something. maybe vocals?

any feedback and suggestions would be appreciated!

[kianski]

Hey I just checked it out and liked it man. I say no vocals but maybe a longer pause in the middle of the track, kinda like how you had it around 75% of the way through. I think there's enough melodies in there to prevent it from being boring and vocals on top would make it messy.

[stonee]

thanks! ya, maybe once i add the builds, and add some efx, it will seem more full.