techno (sample from Whalerider) with ableton and maschine

de wouzer · Post by **de wouzer** » Tue Jan 11, 2011 5:41 pm

I made this techno track yesterday. I would like to have some feedback...

http://soundcloud.com/de-wouzer/paicallsthewales
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the song is called "Pai Calls The Wales", to a song from the soundtrack Whalerider, by Lisa Gerrard

de wouzer · Post by **de wouzer** » Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:13 pm

I really hope someone will give some feedback...it will help me to develop

Tagor · Post by **Tagor** » Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:35 am

there is a problem with your link!

de wouzer · Post by **de wouzer** » Mon Jan 17, 2011 9:55 pm

Tagor wrote:there is a problem with your link!

Strange ( I don;t have any problem) ... but this one will go immediately to the track

http://soundcloud.com/de-wouzer/paicallsthewales

Tagor · Post by **Tagor** » Tue Jan 18, 2011 12:13 am

de wouzer wrote:
Tagor wrote:there is a problem with your link!

Strange ( I don;t have any problem) ...

then go and logout yourself from soundcloud - come back to ableton and tryout your link- you will see

de wouzer · Post by **de wouzer** » Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:26 am

http://soundcloud.com/de-wouzer/paicallsthewales

tnx!

Remi D · Post by **Remi D** » Tue Jan 18, 2011 2:11 am

I had a listen, a couple of things i would do different.

The intro is too long in introducing new sounds or variances.

And the beat could use 2 things, sound layering so it has a fuller sound, right now the beat is thin and not punchy. Second thing, the beat could desperately use some swing added so that it doesn't sound to mechanical.

I do like the haunting vocal, though it is overdone and doesn't evolve either.

de wouzer · Post by **de wouzer** » Wed Jan 19, 2011 10:40 am

Thank you Remi D!

The intro... I do understand... and I think the same thing.

Sound layering to make it less thin and more punchy.
To me it is not clear what you mean with Punchy.
I sometimes try to use different sounds... give them the same place in my sequencer and try to make "one sound" out of it...but unfortunately I never have success with it.... Do you know a place where I can find more info about it, or an example where I can hear the difference?

Swing.... you add swing to the Kick... or to the entire kit?
I never really use that... I think it can be a good idea... but I have to experiment with it.

I will work on these things...

and I hope some other people have more feedback.... I am very motivated to develop myself!

techno (sample from Whalerider) with ableton and maschine

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