The Glass Slipper

[DangarStu]

Hi all

This is a song I wrote recently about the moment the party is over. I was trying to capture a certain atmosphere but I think it still needs some extra high-end instruments after the last chorus - not sure exactly what to do there yet.

http://soundcloud.com/dangarstu/glassslipper

Stuart

[gjm]

Hi Stuart.

2 things. Your vocals have a touch to much reverb. That bass/pipe organ sound thing you have going on has some frequencies that are masking out portions of your vocals in the quieter parts of the song. Obviously just opinions to be taken with salt. Great though to get this far in the production and post for the world. Cheers.

[DangarStu]

Hi

Thanks for the feedback. I agree there is a lot of reverb on the vocal, much more than I would normally use but I was kinda going for that sound with this song. The frequency clashes I think are more of a problem. I added a high-pass filter to the bass and tweaked the levels, I'm hoping that clears things up a bit.

Thanks listening,
Stuart

[DuncanCox]

Hey!!!!!!!!!!!
I am new to this forum and I don't know the technical aspect of the song but I really want to appreciate your work. I like the song. Keep it up.

[joshtimber]

That was something amazing. Keep it up bro!

[DangarStu]

Hi Josh, Duncan

Thanks. A bit of encouragement is always appreciated!

Stuart