Quite a nice track there. Sounds a bit like Tommy Four Seven or Gary Becks rougher stuff!
You did a great job in keeping the attention of the listener!
Well its beautifuly done ! The atmospherics fading in and out are especially interesting. And i like the pounding cross rythym that builds up at the final drop
Really appreciate your closer listening
I really tried to put in some extra bits here and there and experimented with the evolving atmosphere celeriak was talkin about.