New song. Feedback needed! [EDM]

[dBWolf]

Hello!

I would appreciate some feedback on my new project-song. Be as harsh as you want!

http://soundcloud.com/dbwolf/work-in-progress-2

Also, every single file I upload to soundcloud sounds worse than the original .wav or .mp3 file. They are messing with my songs! What am I doing wrong?

Thank you!

[JimmySlizz]

production quality is good but the song could use more peaks and valleys. that is your first buildup doesn't really drop at all and the drums come in and it kind of ends. seems like you know what you're doing musically so just work on song structure and you've definitely got something going there.

[hevvykevvy]

I agree with the above. Everything sounded fantastic but I was hoping it would have opened up a little more. You're onto something though, keep it up. I wish I could give you more feedback but it sounded great.