Undefinable style

[swolf]

Hey! Today I made my first complete track!
I couldn't tell which exact style it fits in but listen and make your own opinion
I still haven't really mastered it (because i don't really know how to do ) but the main idea is here.
I have no experience in song structure or whatsoever so any advice and critics are welcomed!

Here is the link to the song on SoundCloud : https://soundcloud.com/florent-ecochard/ambient-v4

I look forward to read your reactions!

P-S: I'm french so please excuse me if I make some linguistic mistakes

[tekkers]

hey there.. its a pretty good track, especially considering its your first attempt ..

i like the bizarre speeded up vocals... did u make them yourself?

[swolf]

I'm not the one that sing but I transposed, added effects, chopped and swang an acapella that I found on SoundCloud.
Here is the link: https://soundcloud.com/free-vocals/kell ... e-acapella

Thank you very much for the review!

p-s: I have made some small improvements on the structure, the break and some EQing on my track, here is the new link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pYf5F18KSv0

[tekkers]

nice work chopping up and editing that acapella ... i couldn't recognise the original

the added sound effects make the track sound smoother also.. yeah and its it a better eq


why don't you add a picture for your youtube video?
a nice background picture or a simple slideshow is all you need to do, i'm sure you can use windows movie maker or something..
i used imovie to make a slideshow of pics for one of my songs on youtube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjq0e7tvtdU
remember that people watch youtube on their living room tv with their 50 inch screens so its nice to have something to look at..
but also you should put a filter on the master track so you cut off any frequencies below the lowest sound in the track, as it will show up in peoples home cinema systems.. especially their subwoofers...
its something i often forget to do lol

[swolf]

Haha in fact I did put a picture at first but there must have been a glitch in movie maker and it didn't appear on the render... I'll reupload it when I'll have made some further improvements on the track
Thanks for the filter advice, I had no idea!!