1st EDM track I've made in a while...

[RoyalColours]

Would love to hear what u think about it!

https://soundcloud.com/b_yen/what-you-bring

[102455]

IMO too much use of the vocal loop in the first section. Use it more sparingly, so it's less boringly repetitive and also allows the underlying melody to come through.

[Lys/Mørk]

production sounds good. not something i would normally listen too, but i appreciate the quality. was this purely Live? any external gear?

[Timbeaux]

production sounds good. not something i would normally listen too, but i appreciate the quality. was this purely Live? any external gear?

would be also my question.

[RoyalColours]

IMO too much use of the vocal loop in the first section. Use it more sparingly, so it's less boringly repetitive and also allows the underlying melody to come through.

that might've made the song a bit more pleasing, thanks for your input!

production sounds good. not something i would normally listen too, but i appreciate the quality. was this purely Live? any external gear?

Nope no external gear (besides my midi keyboard), all done in Live. Also, I recorded the bass with an actual bass guitar and not a synthesized one.

Thanks for listening !