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Daniel_S
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Moody melodic electronic music

Post by Daniel_S » Tue Jun 24, 2014 3:17 pm

I'd say that this is my best effort yet.

Any feedback always appreciated :)

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Re: Moody melodic electronic music

Post by NoSonic822 » Wed Jun 25, 2014 3:14 am

i like the melodies really cool it's sortof quiet/muffled, good job.

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Re: Moody melodic electronic music

Post by Daniel_S » Thu Jun 26, 2014 11:05 am

Inversoundzzz wrote:i like the melodies really cool it's sortof quiet/muffled, good job.
Thanks man - appreciate that.

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Re: Moody melodic electronic music

Post by re:dream » Thu Jun 26, 2014 1:59 pm

Very nice, very moody and delicate, and the way in which it develops and flows is very organic.

I think you can think about editing it down a bit. As Dylan of Ill Gates says, always end the song a little too soon. And the intro could develop a little bit more quickly.

But yes, a very lovely piece.

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Re: Moody melodic electronic music

Post by Daniel_S » Thu Jun 26, 2014 4:00 pm

re:dream wrote:Very nice, very moody and delicate, and the way in which it develops and flows is very organic.

I think you can think about editing it down a bit. As Dylan of Ill Gates says, always end the song a little too soon. And the intro could develop a little bit more quickly.

But yes, a very lovely piece.
Thanks for the feedback dude.

I think you're right about editing it down a little. I could easily chop of the intro part altogether as you suggested on Soundcloud and just get straight to the meat :)

I know this sounds corny, but I have Push to thank for this. This is the first track I've produced using Push and it has allowed me to be so much more creative with my ideas that nothing seems like a faff anymore. The drum pattern alone, I would never have come up with just using a mouse and clicking in the steps.

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Re: Moody melodic electronic music

Post by soareyou » Thu Jun 26, 2014 6:45 pm

Waw! Nice chilled tune. I do like the intro a lot. Maybe you can try another melody synth or something else to layer later in the track? Maybe panning the synths (taking the nice filters in consideration) could give some nice spatial feeling I think

Keep it up, looking forward to hear more:)
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Re: Moody melodic electronic music

Post by re:dream » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:16 pm

Daniel_S wrote: I know this sounds corny, but I have Push to thank for this. This is the first track I've produced using Push and it has allowed me to be so much more creative with my ideas that nothing seems like a faff anymore. The drum pattern alone, I would never have come up with just using a mouse and clicking in the steps.
Music is born in the body. Out of sensual enjoyment of sound and from making sound. Banging a drum, letting your hands find the keys. Push makes it all one step easier. Just keep on. Let your hands make the music.

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Re: Moody melodic electronic music

Post by Daniel_S » Wed Jul 02, 2014 3:23 pm

soareyou wrote:Waw! Nice chilled tune. I do like the intro a lot. Maybe you can try another melody synth or something else to layer later in the track? Maybe panning the synths (taking the nice filters in consideration) could give some nice spatial feeling I think

Keep it up, looking forward to hear more:)
Thanks for your comments dude.

While I do agree with what you have said, the book is now closed on this one but I always take whatever people tell me away and apply it to my next piece - it's the only way my productions get better.

Panning the synths more would definitely add some more depth to it :)

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