Feedback on electronica/techno track wanted!

[soareyou]

Hello everybody!

I just made something today and am really curious about feedback and criticism!

Ideas concerning how to go on ( in the track) are really welcome as well!

If you don't mind having a listen.. Here you go!

https://soundcloud.com/smallestmountain ... ce-preview

Thanks in advance!

[Ø.B.S]

could use different depth kick hits, stack some kick hits with a sub freqency from operator. maybe some high hats or symbal hits to give more drum complexity. clicks or snaps.

try sampling some drum hits and reverse it . put the reverse clip before the drum sequence you sampled.

add some synth sounds or another type of melody to lead the track.

try reversing some of your ambient sounds and fading them into your mix to add some more build on certain parts.

[soareyou]

Thanks for your elaborated feedback! Im going to have a look soon and see if I can manage to apply your ideas, I'm a novice :p

Thanks!!!