Jazz

[Slyte]

http://soundcloud.com/yama-gee/hollow-wav

[leebass7]

Enjoyed that! Particularly like the drum beat at the beginning and the horns in the background.

[Slyte]

Thx, much appreciated !

[TheChickenSage]

I liked the song, especially the long, slow structure, as well as the horns that alternate between two notes as they fade into the background

Two suggestions though- the click on the drums is fairly loud and seems like it was usually the same volume. I would vary the velocity if the snare hits, and it wouldn't hurt to throw in a few more Ghost notes on the cymbals. Gives it a more living, jazzy feel

And the other change would be maybe uppimg the piano volume in the intro

But I like the track!

[Slyte]

I liked the song, especially the long, slow structure, as well as the horns that alternate between two notes as they fade into the background

Two suggestions though- the click on the drums is fairly loud and seems like it was usually the same volume. I would vary the velocity if the snare hits, and it wouldn't hurt to throw in a few more Ghost notes on the cymbals. Gives it a more living, jazzy feel

And the other change would be maybe uppimg the piano volume in the intro

But I like the track!

Your ears seem more experienced than mines, thank you for this feedback dude

[TheChickenSage]

Well, I'm very inexperienced with Ableton, but fairly experienced with playing drums and music. I came here to see what other people are doing while I work on my first full Ableton song

[Slyte]

I post in the same topic, even if it's not jazz this time :

www.soundcloud.com/yama-gee/nogenre