CRRAZY TECHNO
https://soundcloud.com/zzyzxisinthemix/ ... iginal-mix
SULTRY HOUSE
https://soundcloud.com/zzyzxisinthemix/ ... ck-free_dl
Crazy Techno Track and Sultry House Song
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zzyzxisinthemix
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TheChickenSage
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Re: Crazy Techno Track and Sultry House Song
Bumblebee is an insane track (compliments to you)
As for the other track, I have more specific notes:
Specific times:
- 0:48 bass has little kick...should boomify it and/or consider half-of-your-current-tempo for the bass drum (in this segment)
- 1:whatever love the bass
- 1:40ish the claps could be higher pitched, or you could have a duplicated snare with higher frequencies
- 3:22 the restart of the vocals isn't accompanied by a big change in the rest of the music. The vocals are sort of just added back in.
- from 3:45 to 4:25, there COULD be a crescendo, with the music intensifying rather than staying the same volume
in GENERAL:
- the vocals get subsumed by the music
- the vocals sort of smear together, get lost in the same-volume bass+instruments sometimes (part of that is style though)
- the bass drum in general is a bit weaker than it could be
both are well done
As for the other track, I have more specific notes:
Specific times:
- 0:48 bass has little kick...should boomify it and/or consider half-of-your-current-tempo for the bass drum (in this segment)
- 1:whatever love the bass
- 1:40ish the claps could be higher pitched, or you could have a duplicated snare with higher frequencies
- 3:22 the restart of the vocals isn't accompanied by a big change in the rest of the music. The vocals are sort of just added back in.
- from 3:45 to 4:25, there COULD be a crescendo, with the music intensifying rather than staying the same volume
in GENERAL:
- the vocals get subsumed by the music
- the vocals sort of smear together, get lost in the same-volume bass+instruments sometimes (part of that is style though)
- the bass drum in general is a bit weaker than it could be
both are well done