something short

[abort]

https://soundcloud.com/creepyill/somethingv2


somfing i thought up but never finished, ...is it worth it?

[Jon Mac]

Liked the first half, very nice. Didn't so much like the synth towards the end. Sounded like theme to Grange Hill. But yeah, finish it!

[downfader]

First half, I agree, is a little better. Could do with some more work as this could end up a quality song. Keep the qualities of the distorted bass synth and recreate that in a higher register (a bit like a rock band does) and use those sounds instead of the clean synths in the second half perhaps?