something i am making at the moment {thoughts?}

[Chickenbum]

Hi All

Here is a tune i am making for my Girlfriend; Abbie.

She is into the strokes and that sort of rocky/poppy type stuff.

I thought i would write her a song in that genre (or at least start to write it)

here is what i came up with so far

http://members.dodo.com.au/jjer/abbie.mp3

its not much so far but i hope its a start

PS its not dance/techno/jungle - more soft pop


-Jim

[brightonalex]

I like the beginning, like the opening bit of "summer of 69".
It needs some lyrics though

Oh Abbie!
You're not shabby.
We will marry
in Westminster Abbey.

Abbie Abbie Abbie!

Like Abbey Road
but spelt different.
Give my pants a
massive stiff tent.
Take my load
with your consent.

Abbie Abbie Abbie!

If I were a humble cabbie
Would you still have me Abbie?
When I'm old and flabby?
And getting a bit crabby?

{refrain}