Heavy beats and downtempo

WaveRider · Post by **WaveRider** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 1:33 pm

Dangerous
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...tell me what you think of this one!

Tarekith · Post by **Tarekith** » Tue Nov 28, 2006 2:04 pm

Pretty cool, kinda old-school feel. The bassline wasn't really doing it for me, but the rest was nice. Some of the sounds got a tad repeptitive, probably an arrangement issue more than the sounds themselves though.

element303 · Post by **element303** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 4:14 am

he is right. the bassline is not matching but the rest is good.

WaveRider · Post by **WaveRider** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 6:29 pm

Thanks a lot for listening guys! and especially for comments that can improve my work.

(I am still not getting what is wrong with the bassline, maybe a matter of taste or style I guess... wish I knew what you mean.)

element303 · Post by **element303** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 8:01 pm

ok i will be more clear

the bassline does not match at all there. the sounds you used sounded for me mostly professional but the bassline fuck it up. nothing bad nothing big. it just sound too simple and bad for the good rest. try to make some more tracks in this song to make the sound "deeper" and i bet it will be better than it already is.

WaveRider · Post by **WaveRider** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:27 pm

element303 wrote:ok i will be more clear

the bassline does not match at all there. the sounds you used sounded for me mostly professional but the bassline fuck it up. nothing bad nothing big. it just sound too simple and bad for the good rest. try to make some more tracks in this song to make the sound "deeper" and i bet it will be better than it already is.

ok so you do not like the sound? cause the pitches are not off key. So what it needs then according to you is a rewrite of the pattern AND a new bass sound. Thanks a lot for your advice!

I had alternatives but this bass was the best to me. ...this old-school sound fitter better than a squealing acid bass for exemple.....I will try again someday..

TranNgoc2010 · Post by **TranNgoc2010** » Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:39 pm

I like

element303 · Post by **element303** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 2:13 pm

sure i like it. i told you it sounds cool but the bassline is wrong there. it just destroy the rest kinda and its to loud in the difference to the rest.