New Electronic Track

DJ VAKIS · Post by **DJ VAKIS** » Sun Jan 28, 2007 10:41 am

Please listen my New Track 'Space Man' at:

http://mix2r.fm/node/502

Comments are wellcome.
Enjoy.

DJ VAKIS

DJ VAKIS · Post by **DJ VAKIS** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 6:47 am

Come on guys...

sweetjesus · Post by **sweetjesus** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 9:54 am

this is pretty good,

i think you need some more atmospheric fx to give the mix a little more definition and cues to lead u to the various segments

the first sound which comes in is a little too high passed, it could do with a warmening up (filter top end and let more low in or follow it with a subby version of the same)

the rest is not bad, once again fx and things like spending time crafting your delays get some dub things going

that sound comes back in later and its too harsh still

the hats need to open up and go full rock style and drive the beat and when the snare comes in that should really punch things thru in terms of arrangement

good track flesh it out before u work on other stuff

DJ VAKIS · Post by **DJ VAKIS** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 11:46 am

sweetjesus wrote:this is pretty good,

i think you need some more atmospheric fx to give the mix a little more definition and cues to lead u to the various segments

the first sound which comes in is a little too high passed, it could do with a warmening up (filter top end and let more low in or follow it with a subby version of the same)

the rest is not bad, once again fx and things like spending time crafting your delays get some dub things going

that sound comes back in later and its too harsh still

the hats need to open up and go full rock style and drive the beat and when the snare comes in that should really punch things thru in terms of arrangement

good track flesh it out before u work on other stuff

Thanks a lot