My first completed tune.

mrsteve81 · Post by **mrsteve81** » Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:22 pm

This link here will give you passage to my first complete tune. Please leave feedback even if you think it will make me cry!

http://www.myspace.com/stevengreeneissonice

downfader · Post by **downfader** » Thu Jun 21, 2007 3:31 pm

No, a chinese burn would make you cry.

Anyway, I digress. Great beats and the bass is cool. The drums progress very nicely too. The weird lead synth could have done with something extra, it just seems too simple to my ears (but then maybe I'm not being subjective enough as I have been mangling sounds this week, lol)

I think you should possibly consider some vocals over this? Just my gut feeling however again.

Yeah nice stuff, well made.

mrsteve81 · Post by **mrsteve81** » Fri Jun 22, 2007 10:11 am

Cheers for the feedback. I know the synth lead needs something. Maybe some dirt.
You cant go wrong with a nice bit of dirt, can you?

downfader · Post by **downfader** » Fri Jun 22, 2007 10:16 am

..exactly, and good for the immune system too.