Another new track this week.... "Watching"

bleepsnbreaks · Post by **bleepsnbreaks** » Wed Oct 17, 2007 6:06 am

Hi All,

Just polished off another new track and thrown it up on my myspace, would love to get some opinions.

This is another one week-er, still a few tweaks to be done yet, but largely finished.

http://www.myspace.com/davedaviesproductions

thanks for listening!
And as per, if you like it then send me an add request!

bleepsnbreaks · Post by **bleepsnbreaks** » Fri Oct 19, 2007 12:41 am

Like pulling teeth sometimes getting feedback on here

Anyone had a listen? Got any comments?
I made some good improvements on my last track through comments here.

zurikiser · Post by **zurikiser** » Fri Oct 19, 2007 2:21 am

Ok so I felt sorry after reading your pulling teeth comment. I'll be honest Im not into house. I like IDM,Downtempo, DnB, and ambient to noame a few.

You have good production, sound wise everything is placed well. Your melodies seem a bit repeditive. Maybe try writing longer notes to create more of an atmosphere like you did in your last track on myspace. Sequencing wise, we try and are still trying to have our tracks move people. I think it might help you if you had a clear intro, climax, and ending. You already have captured the energy don't give it away to soon. Make the listener eager to hear your climax and drop it on them hard and dont go back.

hope that helped
good luck

-z
http://www.myspace.com/amantsymphonic

bleepsnbreaks · Post by **bleepsnbreaks** » Fri Oct 19, 2007 2:24 am

Thanks for the feedback man, some great comments there to think about

bleepsnbreaks · Post by **bleepsnbreaks** » Tue Oct 23, 2007 12:02 am

Anyone else had a listen?
Any more comments anyone?