New live user with new tracks

eskribble · Post by **eskribble** » Fri Jul 13, 2007 12:31 am

I've just recently purchased live and started making music. I'd appreciate it if you'd have a listen and let me know what you think. Enjoy or be disappointed

http://www.virb.com/radioe

JoshR · Post by **JoshR** » Fri Jul 13, 2007 5:24 pm

I love the percussion. How'd you do it? Nice track.

Stace · Post by **Stace** » Sat Jul 14, 2007 9:00 pm

Very good mate, like your stuff, 'take a deep breath' is a cracker!

downfader · Post by **downfader** » Sat Jul 14, 2007 10:28 pm

Ooo nice drums.

Bit of mix distortion going on according to my ears though - could be the way the file has been encoded though but it does slightly ruin the dynamics.

Good first efforts as far as I'm concerned.

aerobiotic · Post by **aerobiotic** » Sun Jul 15, 2007 12:58 am

downfader wrote:Ooo nice drums. Bit of mix distortion going on according to my ears though - could be the way the file has been encoded though but it does slightly ruin the dynamics.

Good first efforts as far as I'm concerned.

I agree with the distortion... Very good stuff dude, better quality might be a good option. Very dreamy tune "take a deep breath".... awsome

downfader · Post by **downfader** » Sun Jul 15, 2007 8:11 am

aerobiotic wrote:
downfader wrote:Ooo nice drums. Bit of mix distortion going on according to my ears though - could be the way the file has been encoded though but it does slightly ruin the dynamics.

Good first efforts as far as I'm concerned.
I agree with the distortion... Very good stuff dude, better quality might be a good option. Very dreamy tune "take a deep breath".... awsome

I listened to all his tracks in the end and I liked the way they were set up and arranged, some of its not to my tastes but I can see good ideas that should be allowed to flourish.

eskribble · Post by **eskribble** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 5:17 pm

Thanks everyone for taking the time to listen and for your opinions. I've basically just started making music since I bought live in February. I still have PLENTY to learn.

ScholarlyGent · Post by **ScholarlyGent** » Mon Jul 16, 2007 5:47 pm

Dude! Your off to an awesome start. I really love "take a deep breath." Like the other guys noted, there is some distortion once the melody drops in which might need some remixing. When you use a lot of stereo panned reverb (which I thought sounded great) it is easy to start getting distortion when other things are added on top. Maybe if you center the reverb a bit when the melody comes in it will clear things up... or not... just a guess. Great work though!

ominik · Post by **ominik** » Wed Oct 31, 2007 4:30 pm

JoshR wrote:I love the percussion. How'd you do it? Nice track.

+1 please enlighten us if you will. Beautiful work man.