New song out, another on the way

avatarzero · Post by **avatarzero** » Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:55 am

I have a new song out. http://www.myspace.com/bryanboonemusic
Look for "UnderWinterSkies"
Composed completely in Live. Constructive feedback very much appreciated as I'm just learning about music and such.

Thanks,

Bryan

avatarzero · Post by **avatarzero** » Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:17 am

Rave wrote:Different. Check the timing on some of your stuff as i am sure bits were out. Track was a bit long too. Unless you plan to add more riffs you need to make it shorter.

Interesting style

Thanks for the feedback. I'm not sure what you mean about timing and "bits were out". Perhaps the delay on several instruments was a bit too much?

As for the length,I will think more about editing. Thanks.