Dawn's end - melodic electro track

toma · Post by **toma** » Wed Feb 06, 2008 11:09 am

http://www.myspace.com/djventouse

Track called Dawn's end. Let me know your comments

danmeyer · Post by **danmeyer** » Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:54 pm

i loved the intro, hte way the line creeps in under that repeating tone is really nice.
maybe make the kick a little less snappy, and bring it in later after the hat rises a bit.
I'm not sure why this is electro either, but I really like where its going.
It makes me interested and makes me think

toma · Post by **toma** » Wed Feb 06, 2008 11:38 pm

I don't know myself where it's going, but yes I need to change that kick, and the construction. Have already reworked it some hours.

eggnchips · Post by **eggnchips** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 2:58 am

Nice song though I agree that the kick sounds a bit tinny. I see you've got the TV Tower in the picture.

wellers73 · Post by **wellers73** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 7:10 am

Really nice track. I think it builds and develops nicely without getting out of hand. I also liked the sound choices - all of the synths are quite warm and compliment the mood. Was this done using Live's instruments or plugins?

jamers · Post by **jamers** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 7:55 am

yeah, I liked it. There's a moment at 4:16 where it kind of shifts with that synth coming in, it's one of those spine tingling type shifts. Nicely done. Nice and mellow.

toma · Post by **toma** » Thu Feb 07, 2008 9:22 am

Thanks for your replies.
That kick sound will be changed I hate it now

And yes it is the TV Tower in Berlin because I am here in vacation for one week and work some electro tracks at my friend's place.

It is done with drum samples, some white noise really transformed in the drum kit, bass is Operator, FM8 on the _ x x _ pattern, Massive for the synth.

Am working on it so I'll post as soon as I have something new and interesting to share. Thanks all!

Dawn's end - melodic electro track

Dawn's end - melodic electro track

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