"I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil" Rap Song I making

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EvilEvilEvilEvilEvilEvi
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"I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil" Rap Song I making

Post by EvilEvilEvilEvilEvilEvi » Wed Feb 13, 2008 12:48 am

Here's a little Rap I writing about my adventures. I hoping that you like it. It's called "I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil"

Who is that in the private jet?
Who was that with the fur coat?
Who is the guy making the arpaggerator sweat?
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil

Lol, whose with the microscope?
OMG, don't lose hope in da pope
WTF, trance beats too dope
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil

I shaving off the hair
I get down to the under...where?
The lemur mutants getting scared
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil

Who making the perfect sine wave go outta phase?
somebody's drinking my lemonade!
Get outta my face or you might get a new face (and buy me some more lemonade please)
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil

Who making the modern philososofy.
Who makes the ladies scream?
Who eats donuts every day?
It's not a dream no way!
When you have these riches
Watch out for the snitches
And playing a hero ain't too easy
Cuz trance music is only good for a few tunes and then you have to switches it up and turn on the bass plugins for the best sound.

Who's that man that platinum selling album?
Who fills all the big stadiums?
My game is no nonsense and I don't like record execs
Don't smoke cigarettes!
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil

I make big joke ya'll
I having lotsa fun in saskatchewan
you make the best trance beat when you're heart is broken
what's this in my pockets? a subway token?
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil

Well now I have to go
Remmembering don't say no
Drugs make you stupid if you aren't already when you starting taking them
Seeing you next time sucka in the gymnasium!
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil
Last edited by EvilEvilEvilEvilEvilEvi on Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:10 am, edited 4 times in total.
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Post by pixelbox » Wed Feb 13, 2008 12:51 am

When is the corporate record companies putting out your album to play in clubs? Do want.
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Post by 3dot... » Wed Feb 13, 2008 12:59 am

Watch out Kool Keith !!! :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Post by Tone Deft » Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:13 am

needs at least a bridge of
"bigger... better... faster... stronger..."
In my life
Why do I smile
At people who I'd much rather kick in the eye?
-Moz

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Re: "I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil" Rap Song I making

Post by EvilEvilEvilEvilEvilEvi » Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:19 am

I taking your adivise and I change the verse to go like this:

I gotten kidnapped in Maldives
I fights the crime using ableton live
Who making the modern philososofy.
Who makes the ladies scream?
Exotic honeys sitting on my lap so take a picture and we'll call it a rap.

After that we are making a new breakdown with the tom toms and then in the video lightning strikes a small innocent child and he lives to become a hero. yes, that small child is me. Toward the end of the video, the small child is growed and he comes from the rainbow forests on the horizons of yesterday's flower serpents.
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Re: "I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil" Rap Song I making

Post by smutek » Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:28 am

EvilEvilEvilEvilEvilEvi wrote: Drugs make you stupid if you aren't already when you starting taking them

:lol:

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Re: "I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil" Rap Song I making

Post by dcease » Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:37 am

it needs overdubs, like this

EvilEvilEvilEvilEvilEvi wrote:
EvilEvilEvilEvilEvilEvi wrote:Here's a little Rap I writing about my adventures. I hoping that you like it. It's called "I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil"

Who is that in the private jet? jet?!
Who was that with the fur coat? coat?!
Who is the guy making the arpaggerator sweat? drippin on tha floor
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil (bring it some mo')

Lol, whose with the microscope? scope?
OMG, don't lose hope in da pope (get a rope)
WTF, tarnce beats too dope (y'all can't cope)
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil (bring it some mo')

I shaving off the hair (hair)
I get down to the under...where? (WHAT?!)
The lemur mutants getting scared (why you scared little boy?)
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil (bring it some mo')

Who making the perfect sine wave go outta phase? can't phase
somebody's drinking my lemonade! heyyyy!!!!
Get outta my face or you might get a new face (and buy me some more lemonade please)
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil (bring 'em to they knees)

I gotten kidnapped in Maldives (where?)
I fights the crime using ableton liveveveve
Who making the modern philososofy. (now you see)
Who makes the ladies scream? (insert pron sample)

Exotic honeys sitting on my lap so take a picture and we'll call it a rap. dats a rap!

Who's that man that platinum selling album?a#1
Who fills all the big stadiums? wimbledon
My game is no nonsense and I don't like record execs, sign my check
Don't smoke cigarettes! you'll regret!
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil (bring it some more)

I make big joke ya'll (on all y'all)
I having lotsa fun in saskatchewan (lotsa fun)
you make the best tarnce beat when you're heart is broken (broken)
what's this in my pockets? a subway token? (fuck jared)
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil (knockin on yo door)

Well now I have to go (go?)
Remmembering don't say no (no?)
Drugs make you stupid if you aren't already when you starting taking them (all the time)
Seeing you next time sucka in the gymnasium! (run!)
I See You EvilEvilEvilEvil (bring it some mo')
and a beat...

tcktcktaktcktckatcktck tk
boombapboboombaboom baba da bap
(insert fav. song sample here)
repeat 16X, slight variation 4x, repeat all 2x...

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Post by OvertoneZero » Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:46 am

This shit is real, dog.


Real somethin


:lol:

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Post by Nogi » Wed Feb 13, 2008 7:46 am

Nice track. Try to incorporate more Utility plug and black keys if you want to get here...

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Post by forge » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:10 am

dude...totally missed a trick there - you need some kind of chorus where you yell something and all your crew shouts back "it's EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!"

like....

All you people with Ableton Live
waitin for your time to arrive
and 7 2 of them virgin wives for

EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!

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Post by brightonalex » Wed Feb 13, 2008 9:42 am

Brilliant. You should hook up with these.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q6pbZLiLt30

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Post by UKRuss » Wed Feb 13, 2008 10:37 am

Who dat wiv da rhyme
beat is grime
Messing with my mind
Crime, sublime, living devine time
crew, who?, what i do.

Mashing up the carrot with my swede
make my ears bleed
running with the evil crew?
You gonna need new shoe
blue, true window I flew through

This is the word of good
in my hood, like a weevil
messing with evilevilevil

BRRAP BRRAP BRRAP, BO.

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Post by forge » Wed Feb 13, 2008 12:05 pm

UKRuss wrote:Who dat wiv da rhyme
beat is grime
Messing with my mind
Crime, sublime, living devine time
crew, who?, what i do.

[crew:] IT'S EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!

Mashing up the carrot with my swede
make my ears bleed
running with the evil crew?
You gonna need new shoe
blue, true window I flew through

[crew:] IT'S EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!

This is the word of good
in my hood, like a weevil
messing with evilevilevil

[crew:] IT'S EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!

BRRAP BRRAP BRRAP, BO.

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Post by hoffman2k » Wed Feb 13, 2008 12:13 pm

Nogi wrote:Nice track. Try to incorporate more Utility plug and black keys if you want to get here...

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Funny stuff. You actually bothered to make a gay wrestler look more gay :lol:

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Post by UKRuss » Wed Feb 13, 2008 12:25 pm

forge wrote:
UKRuss wrote:Who dat wiv da rhyme
beat is grime
Messing with my mind
Crime, sublime, living devine time
crew, who?, what i do.

[crew:] IT'S EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!

Mashing up the carrot with my swede
make my ears bleed
running with the evil crew?
You gonna need new shoe
blue, true window I flew through

[crew:] IT'S EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!

This is the word of good
in my hood, like a weevil
messing with evilevilevil

[crew:] IT'S EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!

BRRAP BRRAP BRRAP, BO.
Damn I missed the chorus too!! Works though, you have to say.

Toast, most, evil make you a ghost
Roast, boast, evil is the host

It's EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!

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