First track!!

chizkelly · Post by **chizkelly** » Mon Apr 28, 2008 8:06 pm

Hi
I would be honoured if you would have a listen to my track on my myspace page, its the first one ive finished, a bit short but ok. Any criticism from those with more experience would be greatfully appreciated, tips for improvment would also be warmly welcomed

the link to myspace is

myspace.com/kriztoff01

Hope you enjoy

bicarbone · Post by **bicarbone** » Tue Apr 29, 2008 10:08 pm

well that's not too bad for a first track I would say.

my main criticism would be that it doesn't develop that much, it's basically the same repetitive sequence for 2 minutes until the end, after the filtered intro.

It's quite catchy, but as a listener i want to be surprised and am expexting the big boom boom to explode.

You could make an intro before your intro, that wouldn't give the sliced vocals away...

Hope this is clear and helps as my english is not very good.

Best,

Martin.

chizkelly · Post by **chizkelly** » Thu May 01, 2008 1:01 pm

hey cheers for the feedback, i know what you mean your english is good. Think im gonna keep on going back to that track n reworkin it when i learn more of ableton. Glad you thought it was catchy though