My first steps ever in electronic musicmaking

Sepp Ultura · Post by **Sepp Ultura** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:36 am

Hello friends!

I've uploaded my first song on myspace. What you can hear is the nearly finished 'Move Forward'. The italian bloke on the pic will play some guitars on top..

Everything is made based on samples, put together in Live, mixed in Logic.

Let me hear what you think, I'm extremely curious what the experts have to say about it. For this is really the first time I ever made electronic music.

And by the way: music quality on myspace really sucks..sorry about that!

Cheers Matt
(The Nerd)

http://www.myspace.com/letslegit

Sepp Ultura · Post by **Sepp Ultura** » Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:13 pm

Anyone? I'm just curious..

Grappadura · Post by **Grappadura** » Sun Jul 27, 2008 11:34 pm

its a nice, kinda oldschool composition. the bass sounds a bit weak, like if you eq´d all high frequencies away from them. Maybe also a couple of instruments share too much frequencies in the bass region. I would vary the zapping a bit, take it away here and there. Maybe the zapping also too loud? I´m not sure. All in all a good composition, it works, but polish up the sounds a bit more.

Sepp Ultura · Post by **Sepp Ultura** » Mon Jul 28, 2008 8:22 am

Thank you very much for your feedback. Your points are good, 'cause I don't really hear the problems you mentioned..I lack the experience..