Should I give up my day job?

abletondummy · Post by **abletondummy** » Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:18 pm

http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/637254

Created mostly using Sampler, Slice to Midi and Audio Effects.

Other than sounding a bit 1989, would like some pointers?

zurikiser · Post by **zurikiser** » Wed Jul 30, 2008 1:43 am

no...not bad though

abletondummy · Post by **abletondummy** » Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:31 pm

Cheers... I think.

Anyone else get to the end of the tune???

j2j · Post by **j2j** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:00 am

You are very lucky if you can get comments on your music on this Ableton.com

This track is awesome though. The production, mix, and vibe are totally radical. You just really need to catch the right moment with a track like this. You can't spin it everywhere... But

Man, at the right moment. It would be awesome.

CheerS MatE

frequentare · Post by **frequentare** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 10:14 am

i like the vox --- you slice them nicely

abletondummy · Post by **abletondummy** » Tue Aug 05, 2008 7:04 pm

Ok.... dropped the bass level slightly...

Removed some of the repeating riffs.

Latest version here....

http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/642670

Still not 100% happy with the way the track is built up but quite like where it gets to by the end.

Any advice?

bzgee · Post by **bzgee** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 7:17 pm

That was very good dude. Have you drafted up you resignation letter yet.
PS. Have you anymore?

mrvapour · Post by **mrvapour** » Sat Aug 09, 2008 11:08 am

nice guitar chops, did you do them your self? makes me want to dust off my wah-pedal!

I'm terrible at song structure, just tending to loop ad nauseum. My advice would be to have a go at writing another section for the track, or throw in another instrument, some 60's-esque organ would be cool.

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