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moodee
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// FIRST TRACK // Tinfoil - Nooks & Crannies +++ Plz comment

Post by moodee » Fri Jan 23, 2009 10:41 pm

Hi all,
please have a listen to my latest track.

http://www.moodsoup.com/music/Tinfoil-N ... annies.mp3

Feedback on composition, arrangement, production, mixing, mastering... is much appreciated. 320 quality available by simple request.
Thanks!

moodee
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Post by moodee » Tue Jan 27, 2009 4:09 pm

Come on guys... drop me a line about the track please...

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Post by moodee » Wed Jan 28, 2009 12:02 pm

why bother posting on this forum, really?

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Post by supamonsta » Thu Jan 29, 2009 1:00 pm

I guess there are lots of people on this board, listening and creating very different types of music.

I guess also that not everyone on this forum has time or/and will to have a look in this section.

I often have a look at what music some people post here. But I don't always reply, often that is ambiant, etheral rock, or glitchy tunes that don't really please me, so I don't reply because if I did, I would say 'hey, good work but it's not my cup of tea", so the comment would be totally USELESS...

What I mean, is that perhap's your tune doesn't match the taste of people who listened to... and perhap's did they rather go away than saying "I don't like this kind of music" ???

I think you should describe your music genre in the topic title, like "Electro break coldwave" or something else (I don't know how to describe your tune style precisely ;) )

Anyway, I listened to it.

I like your bass and synth sounds, the overall bass volume and spatialization feels good to me.

I won't say 'this is not my style", byt indeed I feel it lacking a kind of groove punch, but you have to know I'm in 4/4 club fat tracks in these times.

I really like your work on synths.

I Don't like the drums sounds and arrangement, but that's just my own humble opinion ;)

I feel a strangeness between the "breakbeat" first and last parts and the 4/4 one in the middle. The 4/4 one seems un-natural to my ears, when listening the whole stuff. Dunno what advise to give for this thing ;)

Best regards,

monstromo


PS : If you got 6mins, let me know what you feel about my last track:
http://forum.ableton.com/viewtopic.php?t=105929


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