An excerpt of my song.

[Joxe]

Hi all,

I have just uploaded an excerpt of a song of mine.

http://www.vulomedia.com/audio/audiofil ... ptSong.mp3

I know that it is not finished yet however I would like to have your honest opinion on the excerpt.
Feel free to criticize.

Thank you so much in advance.
Kind regards,

[OlafOverDJ]

What kind of Instruments did u use ?

Sounds interesting ...

[Joxe]

Any other opinions?

@OlafOverDJ : I used in this song Sytrus from Image Line.

[darkslide]

Hey man, sounds nice and smooth. I like the panning cymbals and the mini burst beat. You're showing some good attention to detail, you could even vary the patterns on the bursts a bit for extra detail.. ? My only criticism would be: if this excerpt part goes on for a long time I could see it getting too repetitive (without variations). But it is only an excerpt so I can't really judge that...

Nice work so far. Nice piano tone too.

[Joxe]

Any other opinions?

Thank you in advance.

[miccharlys]

The sound is very awesome....very good work done indeed

[Joxe]

Thanks for all your opinions.
I have now removed the excerpt and am working on improving it and adding other parts.

Thank you for having heleped me .