End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by abort » Tue Sep 22, 2009 8:53 am

Thanks guys... This will be the last track for me until I get things sorted out after this big move to NM.

Wishing everyone good luck in all of your endeavors.

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by tan111 » Tue Sep 22, 2009 12:15 pm

For some that's too dark, for me, it's just perfect and I wpuldn't change a thing here

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by liveISlife » Thu Sep 24, 2009 3:28 am

Wow dude, that shit is crazy! The beat and bass are just ridiculous. Your band camp page looks good to. So how long until your making music again?

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by abort » Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:04 am

liveISlife wrote:Wow dude, that shit is crazy! The beat and bass are just ridiculous. Your band camp page looks good to. So how long until your making music again?
Thanks dude, glade you like!!! Two weeks at the earliest, things are just soo crazy right now with the move.

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by vlantis » Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:31 am

I've seen people throw the "dry" word around a lot lately. Sometimes less is more!

I think those whispery vocals in the middle could be changed into something with a bit more melody. The whole track is very monotone as it is. I'm not talking crazy over the top melody, but maybe a little something. Perhaps another echoey vocal track low in the mix to back it up?
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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by liveISlife » Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:34 am

abort wrote:
liveISlife wrote:Wow dude, that shit is crazy! The beat and bass are just ridiculous. Your band camp page looks good to. So how long until your making music again?
Thanks dude, glade you like!!! Two weeks at the earliest, things are just soo crazy right now with the move.
O, alright. That's not to long. Maybe it will be good to take a little break. Then you can build up some creative energy and then just realize it in a hurricane of creation into Ableton! You kind of inspired me to do a vocal track which I put up on the myspace. I kind of just threw it together but I think the vocals came out OK. I also have these 2 creppy illish beats I'm working on. When you come back maybe I will have them up.

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by abort » Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:41 am

Oh yeah that sounds like a good idea! Darn that I can't do anymore with it since this move, but once things get setup and I have time to work with this more... endless possibilities. Good point about the middle, I'll play with that as well.

Thanks for your feedback!!!

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Post by abort » Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:52 am

liveISlife wrote:alright. That's not to long. Maybe it will be good to take a little break. Then you can build up some creative energy and then just realize it in a hurricane of creation into Ableton! You kind of inspired me to do a vocal track which I put up on the myspace. I kind of just threw it together but I think the vocals came out OK. I also have these 2 creppy illish beats I'm working on. When you come back maybe I will have them up.
Yes, time is a good thing at this point. And thats kinda what happened with this track, had a build up of energy!!!
I'm still thinking I could make this one more exciting!!!

I've heard your new track and thought that the vocals were ok, thought that you were developing some good idea's. always fun to hear your illish beats from you. Trying to sell me out aren't you hehe : )

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isn't this FUN!!!!

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by liveISlife » Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:09 am

abort wrote:
liveISlife wrote:alright. That's not to long. Maybe it will be good to take a little break. Then you can build up some creative energy and then just realize it in a hurricane of creation into Ableton! You kind of inspired me to do a vocal track which I put up on the myspace. I kind of just threw it together but I think the vocals came out OK. I also have these 2 creppy illish beats I'm working on. When you come back maybe I will have them up.
Yes, time is a good thing at this point. And thats kinda what happened with this track, had a build up of energy!!!
I'm still thinking I could make this one more exciting!!!

I've heard your new track and thought that the vocals were ok, thought that you were developing some good idea's. always fun to hear your illish beats from you. Trying to sell me out aren't you hehe : )

.../

isn't this FUN!!!!
Hahaa yeah man, I like checking your tracks because I never know what I'm going to get, lol. You always have some new poppin shit going! lol Hahaa yeah I'm trying to out do you! :D I know nothing about singing in key or any of that shit so I just tried to speak, lol. Is that what you do? Or do you go for some in key shit? I'm trying to learn scales and keys and all that on the piano atm but I always just end up making up a scale key thing because it's way easier.

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by vlantis » Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:11 am

liveISlife - there's always vocoders or autotune!
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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by liveISlife » Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:15 am

vlantis wrote:liveISlife - there's always vocoders or autotune!
Lol yeah, I'll have to look into those options! Thx viantis!

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by abort » Thu Sep 24, 2009 4:23 pm

I just go with the beat for now. I would like to start developing a more melodic structures but.. probably easier if the lyrics came first.

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by tommy james » Sat Sep 26, 2009 5:11 am

nice tune abort - maybe add a high part in the intro right before the vocals kick in - nice n creepy style dog aka "thriller" in the middle part

nice work!

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Re: End of the world (manybe somekinda technoish thing)

Post by djgroovy » Sat Sep 26, 2009 4:52 pm

Very good.
Great sound design.

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