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cacti
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Check out my new track, what ya think?

Post by cacti » Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:07 am

still kinda working out some tweeks and kinks, but let me know what you think.


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amigo
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Re: Check out my new track, what ya think?

Post by amigo » Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:55 pm

That is a very interesting piece of music.

I'm not keen on the intro but it passes quickly enough.
I really like the acoustic guitar parts and the overlayed vocal bytes.

Sometimes I think the balance is not right and then other times everything sits perfectly.

I liked it even more the second time I listened so that is a good thing. :)

Thanks for sharing.


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Re: Check out my new track, what ya think?

Post by cacti » Thu Mar 05, 2009 11:57 pm

works for me

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Re: Check out my new track, what ya think?

Post by cacti » Tue Mar 10, 2009 9:37 pm

bump, i could use some feedback


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Re: Check out my new track, what ya think?

Post by vettjd01 » Tue Mar 10, 2009 11:59 pm

a little long the way it is.

i think if you took the last minute and put it in the middle of the song, then had a second beat drop for like 16-32 bars it would be pleasant.

i really enjoy the vocal samples mr. philosophy!
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Re: Check out my new track, what ya think?

Post by the_antagonist » Wed Mar 11, 2009 12:11 am

ok we are cooking.

This is good, iv not heard this before. however the tracks wants to be more uplifting than it actually is. defo like the break down in the middle.

I like all the footering with the pitch at the start. It sounds in your face!

thank you for letting me hear.

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