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BIG CRABS
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My first track. Feedback please.

Post by BIG CRABS » Thu Apr 30, 2009 11:35 pm

This is my first track using Ableton. Its just a rough draft and in no way is complete, but I wanted to get some feedback. I was kinda going for a Pretty Lights type sound. Let me know what you think.

http://soundcloud.com/beatdrops/divine-swine
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Re: My first track. Feedback please.

Post by 8O » Thu Apr 30, 2009 11:56 pm

Hi, for a first track it isn't bad at all :) . Lots of scope to make it much better though... :wink: Some more variation in all the parts and more work on the bass (either a new instrument or lots of devices on it) might be nice. Will you keep working on it or is that the final version?
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Re: My first track. Feedback please.

Post by amigo » Fri May 01, 2009 7:40 am

Sounds good. I too would like to hear the finished version.
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BIG CRABS
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Re: My first track. Feedback please.

Post by BIG CRABS » Fri May 01, 2009 9:47 pm

Thanks. Yeah Im still working on it, I just wanted some input. Ill put up a revised version in about a week. Any more suggestions?
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Re: My first track. Feedback please.

Post by liveISlife » Sat May 02, 2009 4:27 am

I only like your track because your name is, and I quote, "BIG CRABS" LOL
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