Attempt at deep house
Attempt at deep house
Hi there,
Would like some feedback on this new deep house track I've been working on. Thanks in advance!
http://soundcloud.com/pr0fane/afterglow-4
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64065594ffe46e3c/
Would like some feedback on this new deep house track I've been working on. Thanks in advance!
http://soundcloud.com/pr0fane/afterglow-4
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64065594ffe46e3c/
Re: Attempt at deep house
Hi - really like your track - very melodic. I'll add some timed comments to the soundcloud player, but in general the only negative comments I would make is perhaps make the transitions more varied, some more fading in, or filtering in, or small parts of the new melody gradually fleshing out. And longer, longer longer, it was just getting great and then it stopped. I could easily listen to this for 10 minutes or so.
Great work. More!
Great work. More!
Re: Attempt at deep house
I really like your track. I thought it was very well produced and mixed. Shame it is so short because I enjoyed it a lot and would love it much longer. Anyway, thanks for sharing.
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Re: Attempt at deep house
I agree with the rest, needs a little more variation and needs to be longer. Overall a good song and sound would love to listen to when completed
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Re: Attempt at deep house
hmmm sounds nice... but i think the kick drum needs a little bit of tweaking.. it sounds "tuk" rather than "bup"... get my point?
Re: Attempt at deep house
Sorry about that. Have given some feedback to a few other threadsRave wrote:BTW try to review other peoples tracks and don't just take
Re: Attempt at deep house
Thanks for the feedback everybody. Will take it into concideration when I continue my work on the tune
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Re: Attempt at deep house
I think this is only a Demo track...
Work in this track pls more, very interesting
md
Work in this track pls more, very interesting
md
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Re: Attempt at deep house
Sounds goooodd!! Kick and snare combo aint working for me though IMO. Needs more "umph" IMHO. but it is a great track!
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Re: Attempt at deep house
Hi Pr0fane,
excellent track...this is exactly the sound I like...please finish it, please !
Uwe
excellent track...this is exactly the sound I like...please finish it, please !
Uwe
ritsch, ratsch, klick
Re: Attempt at deep house
By the end of the three mins you've got up there I was getting into it, but yes I agree with others, more variation early on, the kick needs a bit of work, is it just a basic 909 to start with? The whole thing needs some top end sheen and sizzle to it but like I say by the end of these 3 mins, I'm into it.
Re: Attempt at deep house
Very nice track. Nice combination of sounds gives it a really nice atmosphere.
Thanks for sharing and getback to us when you have a finished version.
Thanks for sharing and getback to us when you have a finished version.
Re: Attempt at deep house
very nice track, i think if you extend the tune you'll have a chance to play in the pads more gradually, give it a sense of evolution maybe. at the moment the sounds don't get much of a chance to develop before the next thing arrives. play hard to get!
lovely tune tho, loads of potential
lovely tune tho, loads of potential
Re: Attempt at deep house
Hi - I really like ur track - very melodic.I can easily listen to this for 10 minutes or so.
I would make is perhaps make the transitions more varied, some more fading in, or filtering in, or small parts of the new melody gradually fleshing out. And longer, longer longer, it was just getting great and then it stopped.
Keep it up Man!!
I would make is perhaps make the transitions more varied, some more fading in, or filtering in, or small parts of the new melody gradually fleshing out. And longer, longer longer, it was just getting great and then it stopped.
Keep it up Man!!
Re: Attempt at deep house
8O wrote:Hi - really like your track - very melodic. I'll add some timed comments to the soundcloud player, but in general the only negative comments I would make is perhaps make the transitions more varied, some more fading in, or filtering in, or small parts of the new melody gradually fleshing out. And longer, longer longer, it was just getting great and then it stopped. I could easily listen to this for 10 minutes or so.
Great work. More!
michael4u wrote:Hi - I really like ur track - very melodic.I can easily listen to this for 10 minutes or so.
I would make is perhaps make the transitions more varied, some more fading in, or filtering in, or small parts of the new melody gradually fleshing out. And longer, longer longer, it was just getting great and then it stopped.
Keep it up Man!!