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Hi there,

Would like some feedback on this new deep house track I've been working on. Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/pr0fane/afterglow-4
http://www.zshare.net/audio/64065594ffe46e3c/

Hi - really like your track - very melodic. I'll add some timed comments to the soundcloud player, but in general the only negative comments I would make is perhaps make the transitions more varied, some more fading in, or filtering in, or small parts of the new melody gradually fleshing out. And longer, longer longer, it was just getting great and then it stopped. I could easily listen to this for 10 minutes or so.

Great work. More!

I really like your track. I thought it was very well produced and mixed. Shame it is so short because I enjoyed it a lot and would love it much longer. Anyway, thanks for sharing.

I agree with the rest, needs a little more variation and needs to be longer. Overall a good song and sound would love to listen to when completed

hmmm sounds nice... but i think the kick drum needs a little bit of tweaking.. it sounds "tuk" rather than "bup"... get my point?

Rave wrote:BTW try to review other peoples tracks and don't just take

Sorry about that. Have given some feedback to a few other threads

Thanks for the feedback everybody. Will take it into concideration when I continue my work on the tune

I think this is only a Demo track...

Work in this track pls more, very interesting

md

Sounds goooodd!! Kick and snare combo aint working for me though IMO. Needs more "umph" IMHO. but it is a great track!

Hi Pr0fane,

excellent track...this is exactly the sound I like...please finish it, please !

Uwe

By the end of the three mins you've got up there I was getting into it, but yes I agree with others, more variation early on, the kick needs a bit of work, is it just a basic 909 to start with? The whole thing needs some top end sheen and sizzle to it but like I say by the end of these 3 mins, I'm into it.

Very nice track. Nice combination of sounds gives it a really nice atmosphere.

Thanks for sharing and getback to us when you have a finished version.

very nice track, i think if you extend the tune you'll have a chance to play in the pads more gradually, give it a sense of evolution maybe. at the moment the sounds don't get much of a chance to develop before the next thing arrives. play hard to get!

lovely tune tho, loads of potential

Hi - I really like ur track - very melodic.I can easily listen to this for 10 minutes or so.
I would make is perhaps make the transitions more varied, some more fading in, or filtering in, or small parts of the new melody gradually fleshing out. And longer, longer longer, it was just getting great and then it stopped.
Keep it up Man!!

8O wrote:Hi - really like your track - very melodic. I'll add some timed comments to the soundcloud player, but in general the only negative comments I would make is perhaps make the transitions more varied, some more fading in, or filtering in, or small parts of the new melody gradually fleshing out. And longer, longer longer, it was just getting great and then it stopped. I could easily listen to this for 10 minutes or so.

Great work. More!

michael4u wrote:Hi - I really like ur track - very melodic.I can easily listen to this for 10 minutes or so.
I would make is perhaps make the transitions more varied, some more fading in, or filtering in, or small parts of the new melody gradually fleshing out. And longer, longer longer, it was just getting great and then it stopped.
Keep it up Man!!