[Hard Synthpop] New DedMan WIP track

[Ubunoir]

http://soundcloud.com/dedman/goodbye-my ... n-progress

More or less finished but needs polish. I've heard it too much, so I'd love to get new ears on it and hopefully some suggestions/feedback. This is the 1st track I've recorded with my new mic (NT1-A).

Recorded and arranged in Live-8. There are a few ableton instruments in there, but mostly hardware synths.

[tommy james]

great track Ubunir - i would suggest perhaps the vocals blend in a bit better - not sure what it is, maybe they're a tad to loud (also maybe get a few layers there)

but nice movement throughout - i dig the creative panning on the percussion, nice flow

[Ubunoir]

Thanks for listening, and thanks for the vocal mix suggestions. I also realized the vocals were mixed a bit to high-and-dry when I listened to the track on a few different system. This seems to be a recurring mix translation issue for me. It's either my tannoys or my room (or both). I'm working on a "rev-2" now.

Thanks again!