Not my kind of music at all, however, I think it would benefit from some extra movement in the sounds. Some basic filter adjustments (cut off and resonance) on the gated lead would be a good place to start though I would also consider tweaking a few other parameters for added variety.
Also, this style of music benefits from breakdowns and crescendo's.
Give it a go and see what works best.
Keep it up though, even if it only as a hobby.
As your tastes grow, hopefully so will your music, it may be likely that trance isn't your true style.
Take a listen to some of my stuff and feel free to make a comment (I have started a thread on the "link your music" page - feel free to say a few words in there).
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... did=944007