My first track on Ableton Live!! Deep house- please comment

[housemunky]

http://soundcloud.com/housemunky/deception


Hey people!

My first ever project on my mate's Ableton Live after ditching Fruity Loops as my DAW.

It's about 2 days worth of work and is simply a sketch of a track.

Initial thoughts and tips for how to improve it. All criticism taken graciously.

Thanks

[sonorous3]

Hi,

Pretty well produced. At the beginning it has a real loungey, small room vibe but I liked the melody at the break/melody too and turns into more of a main room/small club style of house. My suggestion would be to do two versions/remixes and keep one to lounge groove only and the other on you could make it a main room style.

[tlennon]

Pretty descent track for your first in AL. Keep at it.

[housemunky]

Thanks for the feedback..

I will start working on a separate mix and perhaps one which combines the 2 in an epic