New Track (feedback needed)

[Zubben]

Hey,

I just finished a new track "Why Don't You Go".

http://soundcloud.com/photomatic/why-dont-you-go

Let me know what you think and what could be adjusted or changed.

Thank you

Photomatic

[Sp@nk]

cool i like !! how have you done for the line that starts at 0:14 ?? all modulation ???

But I think that there's no homogeneity and song sounds detached. I mean the sounds are realy good but it doesnt sound like a song you should review something about mastering !!!!

And I didnt get the structure of this song, kinda caotic

[tlennon]

I like the concept and the sounds you've generated. Sounds detuned and disident with some nice scaling. I tried to imagine a club setting and felt that it would be a nice jam for the dancefloor. Keep at it and thanks for the share.

[Zubben]

thank you for the replies,

the sound is just a sawtooth synth arpeggiated, then I just play with the filter envelopes, different distortions etc... It is basically always the same sound trough-out the all music, I just change the patterns or delete some midi notes, had some vocoder and formant filtering.

Yeah I know what you mean it really looks like different parts put together, but it was the way the ideas came to me, not sure how I could simply the stuff.