my 1st finished track dark tech house

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sounds kinda like old progressive house to me... its aight i think

http://soundcloud.com/eatbrian/blast

[Rave]

Not bad , keep working it.

[AceLuby]

Not a huge fan of the 30 second slow intro.

I like the intro of the clap at 1:05

The flow from 1:30-1:45 needs a little work.

You can lose part of minutes 2-3:15. Repetitive and isn't evolving much. Also sounds too much like the first section, not enough variation.

Love the ramp up at 4:16, but it was a somewhat underwhelming delivery.

The last minute and a half seems to take forever.

Overall, not a bad start. Similar to some of my stuff I was producing last year. It needs to lose about 2 minutes IMO and the flow needs to be worked over a little, but the pieces are definitely there.